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Our Father by VforVieslav Our Father by VforVieslav
Ink and calligraphy paper used.
My first piece of Chinese calligraphy. It's "Our Father" prayer. And as You can see - it's still lots to improve :) If You cannot see - please believe. But generally, I'm QUITE satisfied - as for the beginner [and 老外!]...acceptable.

I'm waiting especially for experienced calligraphers comments :D
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:iconmashakp5:
MashaKP5 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017  Professional General Artist
did you acept request? need 3 names for make tattoo :p
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry, I've been out for long. Did you find anyone?
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TiantianZheng Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
it's so touching!!!
but it's not the way we pray. There are two ways as you know: traditional 文言文 & current 白话文
1. This one is translated by Matteo Ricci‎ 利玛窦, the Italian Jesuit priest and Guangqi Xu 徐光启
在天我等父者, 我等愿尔名见圣。
尔国临格。 尔旨承行于地,如于天焉。
我等望尔,今日与我,我日用粮。
尔免我债,如我亦免负我债者。
又不我许陷于诱惑。
乃救我于凶恶。 阿们。
2. some one already told you before:
我们的天父,
愿祢的名受显扬,
愿祢的国来临,
愿祢的旨意奉行在人间,如同在天上。
求祢今天赏给我们日用的食粮,
求祢宽恕我们的罪过,如同我们宽恕别人一样。
不要让我们陷于诱惑, 但救我们免于凶恶。
阿们。
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
阿门
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:iconlizamuchiha:
lizamuchiha Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
This is amazing and I love to learn Chinese and Japanese languages :eager:
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genrou0 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Great work!
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Shy-Flower Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Wow great job! :-o
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PrayerGirl1 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
This is awsome!!
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amourettes Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010
ahhh, this is so great ! i love seeing catholicism in other cultures soooo muccchhh !! TT u TT
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moyanII Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
字写得相当工整,可能就是太过工整的缘故,使这幅字缺了一点飘逸和力道。
第二行的最下面留了一个空间,真的是有点突兀。
书法用语有言:宽可走马,密不容针。意思是笔画多的字,要细笔描,紧靠一起。笔画少的字要分布得当,自然地装满整个方格。不管笔画多或少,方块字都不可大小不一。

话说回来,你的毛笔字写得那么好,令许多华人都自叹不如。老外也如此喜爱中华文化,让我感到高兴。请继续努力!
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VforVieslav Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
你的评论对我来说是珍贵的。我一个人练,是自学的,这样的忠告帮我发展。
我一定会继续努力。:woohoo:
谢谢!
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LionThatWaits Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Student Interface Designer
This is awesome!!!!
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:iconkselka:
kselka Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
Looks great... I can write it only in Polish ;p
Good job.
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Ja też, ale po chińsku ładniej mi kaligrafia wychodzi... ;)
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:iconkselka:
kselka Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
A czy to jest tak trudne na jakie to wygląda? (Chyba zrobię takie sama i powieszę nad łżkiem :>)
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Raczej trudne... ale nic samo nie przychodzi - trzeba pierw zacząć ! :woohoo:
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2O3 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
beautiful.
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MagdalenaWolff Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, podziwiam za odwagę, ja nie cierpię 楷書, jest okropnie trudne! ;) Nie jestem specem, więc nie przejmuj się za bardzo moim komentarzem, ale wydaje mi się, że w pierwszej kolumnie w 上 i w 在 pozioma linia idzie ciut za bardzo w górę (co nie znaczy, że ja napisałabym lepiej ;) ). Pozdrawiam!
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VforVieslav Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Tak, wiem... choć na dzień dzisiejszy bym tego nie wsadził na DA. Wtedy wydawało mi się niezłym osiągnięciem.
Dzięki :woohoo:
Również pozdrawiam - dobrych Świąt!
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:icon164-exist:
164-eXist Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
Featured here>>[link]
:woohoo:
Enjoy~
God bless you :heart:
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Thank You!
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164-eXist Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
:aww:
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Student Digital Artist
This is the one we use:

我们的天父,愿祢的名受显扬,愿祢的国来领;原祢的旨意,奉行在人间,如同在天上。

求祢今天赏给我们的食粮;求祢宽恕我们的罪过,如同我们宽恕别人一样;不要让我们陷於诱惑,但救我们免於凶恶。

因为天下万国,普世权威,一切荣耀,永归于祢。
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Theophilia Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I knew Chinese...or Japanese. I'd love to do a calligraphy piece with the Ave Maria.
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
In Chinese? If that's so here's the Ave Maria in Chinese =P

万福玛利亚,你充满圣宠,主与你同在。你在妇女中受赞颂,你的亲子耶稣同受赞颂。 天主圣母玛利亚,求你现在和我们临终时,为我们罪人祈求天主。 阿门。
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
真棒!谢谢你 :woohoo:
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Student Digital Artist
不客气!
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Oh i just realized there is a tiny mistake, 2 words missing from the version of the Lord's Prayer I gave you.

我们的天父,愿祢的名受显扬,愿祢的国来领;原祢的旨意,奉行在人间,如同在天上。

求祢今天赏给我们日用的食粮;求祢宽恕我们的罪过,如同我们宽恕别人一样;不要让我们陷於诱惑,但救我们免於凶恶。

因为天下万国,普世权威,一切荣耀,永归于祢。

Hehe sorry about that lol. There two missing words are on the first line of the second paragraph.
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Student Digital Artist
ooohhhhh.....sorry, my bad haha. I just realize that the Roman Catholic Church and other Churches use different words, but still means that same thing. lol
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Oh is this the Lord's Prayer in Chinese? The one I read from my Church and all other Churches which serves Chinese Mass is quite different from this one.

Still cool calligraphy writing though :)
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VforVieslav Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks !
Yes, I know it's different. The one used in Church is written in 白话。 And this one is classical.
Am I right?
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Al-LZQ Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Yup! This is the first time I see the classical one though.
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Beshflorin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I so want to put this in my house
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Beshflorin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome!!!!
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RedTapeJunkie Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2009   Photographer
Beautiful work :)
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RoseOfGod Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is good!
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NiKaF Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2009
wow well done!
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:iconk-artist:
K-Artist Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
This is your first piece of Chinese calligraphy?! Amazing!!! :wow: I can't tell! It looks so good! Great message too. :aww: :+fav:
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Yes, the first one. Thanks!
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K-Artist Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2009
:aww:
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Sombraluz-Images Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Professional General Artist
This is very beautiful! :wow: This is so impressive. :clap:
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dehydromon Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, very nice job! You should do it in Japanese, too.
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dehydromon Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome, I can't wait to see it. I wanna learn Japanese, too, but the only program I know of to learn it cost way too much for me to afford anytime soon...
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Tomatogrower Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful work :aww:
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AmandaLam Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009   Interface Designer
Wow!
Makes me wish more and more that I could read Chinese.
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Everything is ahead of You! Still can learn it pretty fast :)
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purple-whirlpool Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009
Ok, I've downloaded this one and printed it, it looks lovely. Thank you. You should do more of these and sell them. I emailed it to my pastor for him to see and he was very impressed!
May God bless you abundantly :hug:
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:iconvforvieslav:
VforVieslav Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Thank You :D
If my skill increases more I will definitely try.
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purple-whirlpool Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
This is beautiful. Would you mind if I download it to print out to hang on my wall? That's awesome, to have the Lord's prayer in chinese!! I love it, wish I could read it, but I don't speak chinese!
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